Well, I’m still working on my Centaur story, and it’s gotten better. My main character, Amica, has become proactive about arranging the end she wants. I’m not entirely happy with it yet, but it’s getting there.
I had a revelation at Katherine Howell’s tute today, that Amica was too passive. It is important that the main character is active in bringing about the final events. I guess the main character is the string that ties it all together. If events are just happening randomly around them, then that’s like bricks floating in the vacuum.
I’m still a bit concerned about undertones of bestiality. But that didn’t seem to worry the gods in ancient mythology.